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Task #3416
closedDeveloper Guide: NDNLP introduction
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Description
Add a section to introduce NDNLP and describe its features.
Updated by Junxiao Shi over 8 years ago
- Assignee set to Eric Newberry
The section should be created under "Face System".
Text from NDNLPv2 tech report can be reused in this section.
Updated by Eric Newberry over 8 years ago
- Status changed from New to In Progress
Updated by Eric Newberry over 8 years ago
- Status changed from In Progress to Code review
Updated by Junxiao Shi over 8 years ago
Review of Face section at nfd-docs:commit:8c2ceec3492e9f7105569cd0e7dbb036885992a1.
"NDNLP" section:
- The first line uses quote-marks incorrectly: the first quote-mark should be U+201C and the second should be U+201D, but two U+201D are used. See https://en.wikibooks.org/w/index.php?title=LaTeX/Text_Formatting&oldid=3033246#Quote-marks.
- The term link adaptation layer is deprecated in #2222-34.
- In "incoming Face", "face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to
Face
class, but refers to the general concept. - Cite NDNLPv1 tech report.
"fragmentation and reassembly" paragraph:
- FragIndex is "zero-based position" or "zero-based index", not "zero-indexed position".
- "All other link-layer headers are only attached to the first fragment" is wrong. Only those link-layer headers that associate with the network layer packet are required to be attached to only the first fragment and would be ignored if attached to other fragments. Link-layer headers not associated with the encapsulated network layer packet can be attached to any LpPacket when space permits (for example, an link-layer acknowledgement can piggyback onto any LpPacket).
- "The host that receives the packet" can be simplified as "The recipient".
"consumer-controlled forwarding" paragraph:
- "Face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to
Face
class, but refers to the general concept.
"cache policy control" paragraph:
- The plural form of "data" is "data".
"incoming Face indication" paragraph:
- "Face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to
Face
class, but refers to the general concept.
Updated by Eric Newberry over 8 years ago
Revisions based upon note 5 have been pushed.
Updated by Junxiao Shi over 8 years ago
Review of Face section at nfd-docs:commit:02f00bb05a7723c305f93723bfd5b456fc30467a.
"incoming Face indication" paragraph:
- In the paragraph title, "Face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to
Face
class, but refers to the general concept.
Updated by Eric Newberry over 8 years ago
Revisions based upon note 7 have been pushed.
Updated by Junxiao Shi over 8 years ago
- Status changed from Code review to Closed
Text at nfd-docs:commit:d77bef6faf22845d1dbbfafc20dd878f040ce5de looks good.
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