NFD

Review of Face section at nfd-docs:commit:8c2ceec3492e9f7105569cd0e7dbb036885992a1.

"NDNLP" section:

• The first line uses quote-marks incorrectly: the first quote-mark should be U+201C and the second should be U+201D, but two U+201D are used. See https://en.wikibooks.org/w/index.php?title=LaTeX/Text_Formatting&oldid=3033246#Quote-marks.
• The term link adaptation layer is deprecated in #2222-34.
• In "incoming Face", "face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to Face class, but refers to the general concept.
• Cite NDNLPv1 tech report.

"fragmentation and reassembly" paragraph:

• FragIndex is "zero-based position" or "zero-based index", not "zero-indexed position".
• "All other link-layer headers are only attached to the first fragment" is wrong. Only those link-layer headers that associate with the network layer packet are required to be attached to only the first fragment and would be ignored if attached to other fragments. Link-layer headers not associated with the encapsulated network layer packet can be attached to any LpPacket when space permits (for example, an link-layer acknowledgement can piggyback onto any LpPacket).
• "The host that receives the packet" can be simplified as "The recipient".

"consumer-controlled forwarding" paragraph:

• "Face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to Face class, but refers to the general concept.

"cache policy control" paragraph:

• The plural form of "data" is "data".

"incoming Face indication" paragraph:

• "Face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to Face class, but refers to the general concept.

Revisions based upon note 5 have been pushed.

Review of Face section at nfd-docs:commit:02f00bb05a7723c305f93723bfd5b456fc30467a.

"incoming Face indication" paragraph:

• In the paragraph title, "Face" should not be capitalized because it does not refer to Face class, but refers to the general concept.

Revisions based upon note 7 have been pushed.